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Micro Flash Fiction, Horror Edition


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To kick things off (and since I haven't yet felt ready to relinquish the Halloween season for Thanksgiving, not to mention Christmas), I offer my response to a Writers Write prompt posted on Halloween: "Write your best horror story in two sentences." Enjoy, and feel free to submit your own in the comments.

Here's my attempt:

Cloaked by the leafy hedge that was half-hidden in the scant moonlight, the axe murderer watched his victim approach, his muscles coiling and ready to leap out. Peering from the further darkness, something unimaginable--all slithery limbs and scaled haunches and hard teeth (too many teeth)--began to quietly hunch across the lawn toward the man who clutched the axe.

And, just for fun, here is my 16-year-old daughter's attempt (which I thought not too shabby and pretty creepy!): I went to say goodnight to my daughter, and she told me that something was under her bed. I checked, and huddled underneath was my daughter, crying as she said "Mommy, there's something in my bed."

[I've been fascinated by "flash fiction"--super short fiction of a maximum of 1,000 words, but usually only a couple hundred or less--for a few years now. I think the absolute master would have to be Ernest Hemingway's heartbreaking and terse: "For sale. Baby shoes. Never worn." Short, but powerful, and containing all the "necessary" elements of a story--a beginning, middle, and end, and a plot of sorts. That last sentence punches you in the gut and drives home the "plot," however rudimentary.]

 

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CTRLZero

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Oh, fun!  I have not tried this before, so I will borrow your theme:

"The sight of the axe protruding from my haunch irritated me more than the man-ribs stuck between my teeth.  My slither home was rendered...inelegant..."

 

 

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EyeQueue

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Oh, fun!  I have not tried this before, so I will borrow your theme:

"The sight of the axe protruding from my haunch irritated me more than the man-ribs stuck between my teeth.  My slither home was rendered...inelegant..."

 

 

Most excellent! :):)

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    • Katzchen24

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      1 hour ago, Giraffe said:

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    • Melissa1977

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    • Giraffe

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      As a homeschooling ("homeschooling") parent how is she not hiding in shame that not a single one of her children likes to read? If they were doing a decent job homeschooling I'd expect the answer to be closer to "most of our children love to read. We have one/two who would read 24/7 if we let them and one/two who hate reading with every fiber of their being and one/two who love reading but have to work extra hard at reading."
       

      Like the Rods and so many other fundies I snark on, they are abysmal failures at homeschooling. 

      Edited by Giraffe
    • Giraffe

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      7 hours ago, Sops2 said:

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      3 hours ago, marmalade said:

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    • Giraffe

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      I imagine most of the second generation have re-thought their parent's/in-laws views on having as many children as they possibly can, even if they went into marriage with that ideology. I'm sure some of them experienced a rude awakening when they realized Michelle was the exception not the norm. 

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